Hello³ Everybody!!

This is my new tune h34r:

Please review it!!

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http://www.torun.mm.pl/~kchammer/Sunclyder...%20Clouds96.mp3

Greetings.
Karol

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Last edited by Sunclyder on May-30-2005 at 16:14

i like the drums in the beginning! nice intro!
decent kick underlined with nice fx!
bass sounds great!
nice break! cool melody!

you have to work on the volume of the track! party it's way to loud! but with some eq'ing or mastering it isnt such a big deal!

would like to hear a 192kbs version...

Hey.

-Good tribal at the beginning
-The kick seems to have a bit too long tail. Try running it through a faster compresser.
-Good intro synths. They capture the mood great.
-This is quite sapcey in a good way . Great atmosphere.
-Good use of delay on the counter rythm.
-After the break, the song becomes summery but its kind of reptative. Try adding some variations to the rolling trance pluck. That or add some vocals or another melody on top of this.
-The second break is MUCH better . This should be the first break. The piano/harmony strings patch that is coming in is very nice . This should really be moved up to the first break so the song holds its flow.
-The outro is decent but it seems to end a bit abruptly on a continuing note. Make another pattern that finishes the song on a down note so that it doesnt feel like another pattern is coming.

Overall, this track is quite good. It is well produced. I'm not sure if you did any mastering work on it but the EQ is quite good standing on its own if you didnt master it.
Grade A

Cheers,
Zac

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Thx for first opinions & sugestions!!

Hmmmmm!! Not bad!!

Thx Zac & Klang

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Hmmm ZAC you right This is good song :P

Pozdro Sunclyder :P zapraszam do siebie

hey....I'm positive I reviewed this one last year by you!?

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Beautiful chords, great vibe and good production. I love the way it builds up from the intro. The first chord change at 1:38 is simple beautiful, it really got me emotionally.
Great point from Zac about the break, I agree that the 2nd break is better but I think that if the lead-out from the first break was worked on it would really kick ass. The chords after that and the rest of the song are really nice.
Excellent work, I thoroughly enjoyed listening to this!

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Really nice song Sunclyder - I really enjoyed this one - nice summery feeling and uplifting melodies - could get signed I think.

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Release, release Where??

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Very nice! Good energy! I'm really digging this!

reupload it...

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