Nice style you got going on there....

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Thanks.

I'm taking tips and Hints from a bigname producer. I need youall's help though.

Its flippin sweet when my stuff gets heard by you savvy fellas.

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Last edited by Kthought on Jun-04-2005 at 09:05

Good intro apart from that extremely fast panning.

The lead doesnt sound that powerful until it comes in the second time around 4:18.

The track seems like it needs something else and i reckon a vocal would suit this track perfectly.


Overall a good track. Keep it up

i really dig the bassline

I suppose i should let you guys know what i'm using as well...

Reason 2.5 +
Sound Forge

starting to feel limited by reason, especially if i DID want to do vocals... Oh Well!

Ill mix up the lead just a smidge... but its very resonant so i have to be careful with that.

Thanks for the feedback!

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Originally posted by DJ RANN Dude, music is only second to beer in allowing ugly people to have sex.

Updated Download:

Lead Synth Brighter,

Fast Panning Turned into Stutter (Originally what it was supposed to be)

Fixed a few other things..

128kbps mp3
Length: 6:29
Download Available on the first post.

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Originally posted by DJ RANN Dude, music is only second to beer in allowing ugly people to have sex.

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Originally posted by Kthought Thanks. I'm taking tips and Hints from a bigname producer. I need youall's help though. Its flippin sweet when my stuff gets heard by you savvy fellas.

*cough*

Quote from http://www.kthought.com/bio.php

"A Self-Taught and Independent DJ and Producer, ..."
Really?

Haha, just playing you. Listening to your track now.
Nice phaser/panning fx there. Original style.
Not sure about the melodies in the buildup. Not my style really.
Lead sounds distant and flat. Supposed to? Give it more presence with proper EQ-ing.
I would fade out those hihats on the end just to help out the DJ and make some action in the ending.

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Haha, Thanks for the input:

I was self taught and independent right up until 2 weeks ago, when i started taking advice... For 5 years though i've relied on noone to gain skills. So i can still claim that Self Taught Business!

Thanks Again. - Mastering is an art, could take days.

Ill expedite the proper outro too! something i always overlooked when im excited to compile the track.

Thanks!

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Originally posted by DJ RANN Dude, music is only second to beer in allowing ugly people to have sex.

Nice track.

Smooth buildup and drop. I think the main melody could be offset slightly to give it better groove though. Imaginative use of fx and nice synth programming all round.

The main lead synth sounds a tad thin like it should be a supersaw or something but its falling a bit short. Maybe double it up and have one without so much delay on it and eq it a bit lower. That might fill it up a bit more.

You got a very clear sound going, geeze... I'm constantly surprised with what people can do with reason these days.

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Arright,

As Of now, i'll be completely overhauling the lead.

Your feedback is GREATLY appreciated ! !
Stay tuned.

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Cool sounds in the intro.

Woo for the gating.

That whooshing thing at 2:04 is really cool in how it seems to come from behind.

Good melody and stuff. I like it a lot. Great atmosphere.

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