I need feedback, come on!

Ahh, come on, this tune is too good to be ignored!

I am lovely the mellow, atmospheric beginning. Awesome percussion all the way.
And then at 1:05 it takes up more energy. I admit its groove really made me stomp my feet and play drummer with my fingers on my desk, heh. You can consider this a great compliment since not so many tunes make me do that.
2:06 - impressive. The drums are one of the best I've heard in a long time. So many different elements working so perfectly together and grooving like hell. And I am liking the melodies as well.

The passage at 3:34 is a bit confusing though. Maybe it gets a little too muddy. I'd consider removing one of the saw lead pads (or whatever you got there causing the muddiness) and replacing it with a softer pad.

Massive ending. If you can fix the a bit muddy breakbeat part, I'll be enjoying this even more. Keep it up!

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You added much detail in the drums. I like that.

The reverb causes the mix to sound muddy, don't like that. That's also the cause of that your track doesn't have dept in sound. Everything is whole plat. Try to decrease that reverb, it's really necessary.

I'm halfway now, and the mix is getting bored to me, like it is repeating itself. Maybe it fun to mix some elements, or something like that.

Probably, this review sounds a little bit negative. The track also contains really good aspects, like the feeling and atmospere in the overal mix. I think that the mix will be a lot better with less reverb.

Thanks, guys!

MORE replyes please

This is really good, percussion is excellent, synths are excellent and you've even got some breakbeat in there as well

I don't think the breakbeat bit sounds muddy, can't really fault it, really nice groove and feel to the whole track. It wouldn't be the biggest tune of the night (in one of my sets at least, could be a big tune in a softer set) but it'd be the perfect tune to set up for a bigger tune.

9/10

(Scale: 0 = don't bother, 1-3 = needs work, 4-5 = nearly there, 6-8 = releasable, 9-10 = I'd play it)

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The percussion is excellent. The melody is good too, but at times it sounds a bit too chaotic and hard to make out. Maybe cutting off a couple of frequency ranges on the leads would make it easier to listen to. That square-sounding lead especially bugs me. Composition-wise the track is very good, and it's something I'd keep if it was a bit cleaner sounding.

Thanks to you all, you're really helping me! Hope to see more replyes here..

Excellent track m8, lots of energy. Good percs, synths and basslines.
-Alex