Commenting as I listen now...
Nice bass and bubbling synths.
You definately need a more distinct kick. Boost it. remove interferences with the bass (!) so that it can be really called kick :P
The melody is cool. That big breakdown works quite well.
The rimshot type percs sound a little too static and too repetitive. Later on this gets better but in the beginning you should improve it. I'd try experimenting with pitch and panning.
The synthwork is very nice. Cool melodies towards the end. The phaser in the end makes the tune kinda Psy-ish .. actually enjoying the tune pretty much, cool flow of melodies.
Synth quality is top. Now you need to work a little on your mastering.
Keep it up!

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yay a comment!!! thx man, thats what I call constructive criticism
yes.....mastering....lol

Last edited by gr8ape on Aug-25-2005 at 01:14

Kinda Psy-ish of a tune but I like it. The kick could be a bit thicker or something. Boost it like cybernetica said so you can differentiate the bassline and kick. They seem to interfere with each other. Other than that it's a good track. I'm looking forward to hearing more tracks from you.