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| quote: | Originally posted by Subtle
hey, listening...
it starts out pretty nice, but to be honest i find those bouncy melodies a bit too much, i prefer music more linear.. 2:22.. wot, u add a bassline and some nice metallic sound, niiice.. and some acidized sounds, they sound cool.. 4:10 u got an excellent drive there.. but again u are bouncing notes 
original piece as always.. never bad, takes my ears about 5 minutes to get used to the sound
still, great work, but a little more linear please? |
Im not wired for linear processing Though I could always have a crack at it. What do you mean by 'bouncing notes'?
Thanks Subtle.
| quote: | Originally posted by thoughtlessjex
The I think your lead could stand some more atmosphere, like delay or something. It kind of clashes with the pad sometimes because the pad seems to be hinting at atmosphere while your lead denies atmosphere.
Try to to something other than kick rolls to lead into your transitions; there are better ways to build energy. |
I recently replaced the pads with a poly layer. I will try delay on the lead, that could work.
Good point with the drum rolls. I do tend to be a drum roll freak, I should try other ways to build up. cheers jex!
thanks for the feedback guys. I have recently spent alot of time redoing this track. Your feedback is invaluable & has helped heaps. Ill post REV2 up soon.
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