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The fast release on your pad is hella jarring in the intro. Consider revising.
Pluck on the melody is beautiful.
Eh. Doesn't feel nearly as complex as the original. Good for easy listening, I suppose, but not much there, critically. I'd also say it peaks too early. The breakdown doesn't really create much tension, and the drop doesn't do much except bring the beat back.
Good variance in the breaks, though.
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