Hey pplz, this is a song that i'm currently working on, its unfinished but close to completion. Any thoughts on what people think would be of great assistance

cheers
pete

http://audio.5am.com.au/
the file is called:

The_Peacemakers_-_Children_Of_Gone.mp3

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listening

Nice clean sound. I like the lead.

I think another percussion instrument somewhere might make it sound overall more full.

Aswell as that, I think another more subtle instrument to compliment the lead synth and create more harmonies would make this a killer track. Just to create a bit more detail.

The techniques used are interesting and the transitions are varied which is always good. Not a fan of songs that have the same lead all the way through, but it didn't really get boring as much as it would if the rest of it weren't interesting.

I liked this track tho even though its not what I would normally listen to.

cheers dude, u made some goood points! i'll get back to work :P

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