Hey guys,

Well I've been working on this remix for quite a while now, and hopefully you will appreciate my interpretation of the great Mono - Rise. It's quite something to put your work for all to judge, but I'm glad I'm doing so.

http://s35.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...P43CKHUQTJLH6XB


Cheers fellas.

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Intro sounds a little empty. That spooky ambient breakdown was pretty cool. The melody sounds alright, but after the breakdown it feels like there's something missing. Melody cuts a bit too drastically at around 4:45. Now keep in mind I'm only being harsh because this is one of my favorite tracks ever. It sounds pretty good overall.

Thanks for the feedback. Anyone else like to comment?

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I agree with the melody being cut too sudden. But overall I like it. It's a bit minimalistic, without lots of synths & strings, but that's what I liked about it. original!
keep it up!

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listening to music with your heart... pure energy... you can feel . in the air . on your skin . in your soul

track sounds great to start with.

got put off by the melody that comes in around 1:10. needs to be a lot more subtle and a different synth sound.

breakdown sounds lush. however that deep atmospheric sound you use at the begining of the break dissappears when the melody comes in and doesnt re appear... i loved that and it gave the break a very deep feel and really added to the track. fade the atmoshheric sound in and keep it running throughout the break and most of the track there after.

it sounds like your style would work for making a deeper and less uplifting version. especially if you utilised that atmospheric bit more.

i like tracks to be deep....

i really liked your rendition mate.

have a listen to my track on the forum if you have time and

best regards. i look forward to hearing any more stuff you do.

richard gale

Thanks guys, I put a lot of effort into this one and I'm glad people are appreciating it. Truly thanks.

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