Just finished my first bonafide original track, and it's a progish house little number at 128bpm. I've done pretty much all remixes up until now. It's a bit short and a bit simple, but I'm really happy with it nontheless. let me know what you all think.

Retrobyte - Fondue (Original Mix) - VBR MP3 - 10.56mb

if anyone wants to do a remix, let me know - it'd be fun.

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http://www.myspace.com/retrobytemusic

theres a scaling reverb on the snare right? not sure I think that fits..

the xylophone or whatever you got there ringing in the background is to loud..or remove it completly.

otherwise you have some cool melodies here, nice variations, but what I would like to hear is a breakdown with only the bass and some distortion effects on it, then have the rest slowly kick in one by one to a modest climax.

take care,

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Name: Magnus Karlsson
Website: Dreamworld
Review my latest track: Magnus Karlsson - Source of Inspiration

nice stuff.
I think you should change the snare.
nice melody
You should add more precs, open hihats, congas, crashs hehe.
fxes could be nice.
lacking but nice.
You should remake it and add more depth to it.

4/10

Omer

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My tracks:
The Darkone - You Come With Power
The Darkone - Falling Stars Part 1 (Original Mix) *NEW*

I think that theres lots of progressive vibes in this tune. I love it.

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www.massprogressive.com

pretty good progressive vibes. definitely up the production quality with more depth and this would be complete

keep it up

g