Now, finally, after hours and hours of work, my track is finished.

Monogon "Nova"
Genre: Trance (melodic)
Length: 8:39
Quality: 128kbit/s

Any feedback is much appreciated.

cheers..
Ronen.

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Last edited by ronk on Apr-01-2005 at 18:33

thanks for your feedback ********

anyone else wanna post a feedback? pleeease?

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Nice track there mate, it reminds indeed a bit of happy hardcore melodywise, a bit how Dune did their tunes. But at the same time also it has a classical music kinda of melody during the lead. And i love that part. Too bad it is only a 128 version , the mastering now sounds rather muffled , there is not a lot of treble in the song.

For the rest very nice track!

Cheers,

Nomen nescio

thanks Nomen you're right, there really isn't enough treble (and that's why the mastering sounds a bit muffled). I'll try to fix that.
anyway I'm glad you liked the track.

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I'm not a sound engineer, but too bad for the tremble, I like the song anyways. Firm buildup, but what's with the sound drops? Definately euphoric, but the saw-leads at 5:00 seemed a bit muffled. What equipment do you use?

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appreciate your feedback mate, glad you like it.
as for the tremble, I'm working on that, that's also the reason why some instruments sounds muffled.
mmm my equipment? good ol' FLStudio, no hardware, just quality samples and vsts

so..anyone else wanna comment?

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ok, first of all...that bass in the beginning there... its so overused, heard it so many times..

percs are standard but ok, the second bass is not bad... but it could sound tighter still...

i really like those strings u are using.. and the melody, its good.. like that.. whats with the volume changes? (are u intetially messing the track up in case a sign or something like that?)

nice work, as it is 128 i cant say much about the quality.. its a pretty descent tune u have written..

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I loved it. A little "boring" at the beginning, but later on it gets really good. Better quality would have been nice, and the volume thing just confused me...

thanks a lot Subtle and Ranzel! 'm happy you like it.
yeah that volume thingy is because I have sent this track to some labels..it's my best melody so...I really hope to get response from them

bout the first bass, don't think I've heard it before and that's why I used it, but if you say so..don't know, I'll try to do some eqing to make it different.

cheers
Ronen

edit: about the quality, 128k, it's soundclick's limitation belive me I wish I could upload a 192k full to get feedback on the quality as well.

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Last edited by ronk on Apr-04-2005 at 13:14

i think your track sounds to basic and thin. Your sounds are pretty standard and they all miss fullness and depth. Your percussion and beat miss alot of power as well and are very bland. I think you got the basics covered but it misses the professional edge with sounds and creativity. Your melody is pretty old skool, i like that, if you could work your feeling fore melody out in a fuller more profi track it could become pretty nice. Your main synth is nice btw

And i wont depend on much label respons on this to be honest, it misses some more elements and as i said, the professional edge. But this track is promising for the future for sure, keep it up .

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hey thanks man I missed your post, first time I read it.
well I don't think this track is y'know a really really pro-sounding track, it's still my second one and I have learned a lot of things since then. I also changed a couple of things in the track (levels mainly, but some other things too) so it doensn't really sound like the one in soundclick.

anyway thanks for the feedback I'll keep in mind your notes.

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I'm really likeing the synthlines, not too bad percs imo. Just try and edit out all the sudden volume fadering like @ 7:15 minutes. I enjoy your overall uplifting sound very much.
-Alex

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