..Hi...

Dark...

your low freqs is overflowing,no mids
I think for this track need some kind harmony,melody?...because now everything is on one note....ups..

From this track you can do NOIZE track...

Idea 8/10
quality 6/10
tembres 7/10
FX 7/10

porgression of this track can be to 10/10

please work with this track

this is my track,please visit

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forum/s...threadid=279860




DANCE TILL TRANCE

Thanks man, appreciate the review

I'll be sure to check out your track as soon as I possibly can

your volume mixing is really bad man I can hardly even hear the kick.

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Hey man,
Very good ideas you got on here, as someone else mentioned, u need to balance better ur sounds and to work with the mastering because I just hear a bunch of sounds crashing between them .
I think is the more minymlistic track I have heard from you so far, it could work very good for a movie or a video game, but as a track it's really monotone.
In overall, you are improving yourself man but try to be more melodic, harmonic, when u are begining to produce it's normal to focus into minimalistic stuff, I think you will be in this stage during some months before you begin to created more complex and musicalship stuff .
Good work man .
Kopi =o.

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