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hmz... first of all these plum acid sounds are too loud I think..

01:41 , nice background.. man add some stuff like inda techno tracks.. would be very nice.. what to say more.. I will wait for the full version ... ps. dont like the plums sounds very much :P , maybe just put the volume a bit down on ..

btw. Thx for the feedback for the track Waiting .. anyways visit my other 2 songs too links -->

- http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=283095
- http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=278147

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Cheers,
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woah woah woah....reverb echo bla bla....
wow, turn that down man, u gotta clean this up a lot.
bring acid up, un reverb quite a bit, bring symbols up.....
lotta structure issues to...a lot
keep at it man, takes practice

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Thanks for the reviews guys,

Sheen Trickz: Yeah will work on some techno elements I think, lot of percussion in there so may change this around a bit to be more techno Will work on your suggestions too, thanks.

Mr Rogers: I'm guessing you mean the reverb on the acid? It's happened because of the note structure not me placing on any reverb myself on, would you suggest I spread the notes out a bit maybe? . Also any structure problems you could bring to my attention? Appreciate you listening

Made some slight alterations and a new version is available to download from the first post.

Thanks

Hey man,
First of all, ur kick is very weak, u need a very strong kick in this one imo, EQ to add more punch, also I would try an overall compression to boost the sound.
The bass is better than in ur last tracks , but it needs some more work on it, and add more Fx's, as I told u before, when u do music so minimalist like this, u at least need to play with a lot of Fx and panoramics because becomes very monotone and flat.
Good work keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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Cheers for the review mate . Will work on your suggestions, thanks.

I like the acid in this one, the double kicks I dont like so much, after a while, the acid starts to bore after a while though, you can help this by doing some "tricks" with it, like increasing pitch progressively and adding filters etc..
A nice trick for the kick is: layer two kicks, put up the high frequencies for them ( a trick people taughtI me on TA )
the bass comes out good, I like it! I'd also "suggest" to give it more percussion, you can really make something out of this man!
good luck Im looking forward to your progress!!!

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Originally posted by Takkra I like the acid in this one, the double kicks I dont like so much, after a while, the acid starts to bore after a while though, you can help this by doing some "tricks" with it, like increasing pitch progressively and adding filters etc.. A nice trick for the kick is: layer two kicks, put up the high frequencies for them ( a trick people taughtI me on TA ) the bass comes out good, I like it! I'd also "suggest" to give it more percussion, you can really make something out of this man! good luck Im looking forward to your progress!!!

Some really useful tips there mate, thanks, really appreciated