Hey this is my update of the track I posted a few days ago, I changed:
-the intro
-the bassline
-the build up
-the outro
-various fx
..

The intro should be less boring now and the bassline should fit the track better, and i made some saws more wet and blabla eq stuff etc.

tell me what you think of the update

Link:

hxxp://rapidshare.de/files/3867140/Takkra_-_Velvet_Jet.mp3.html Remember to replace the xx with tt and then past it in your urlthing. thanks

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Last edited by Takkra on Aug-11-2005 at 09:07

hey just listened to the track.

not having the hyperlink almost put me off.

the start sounds wicked. really fresh. that chopper effect on the melody really works. makes it a bit hard to listen to at a computer desk but i bet it sounds wicked to pilled up clubbers.

possibly save that sound so it comes in just as the dj has finished mixing it in...

like the lead that comes in at 55secs. again really fresh and non standard. it follows the bass well but made me feel ike it was not gonna keep with the bass. i think this is why it sounded so good..

when it gets to the break and afterwards i recon the track gets too busy and loses the great feel you created. the main lead and that choppy sound from the beginning work so well on their own that i would use them on there own during the main part.

save that lush main lead till the break and main part!


anyway i think this has big potential and it sounds pro.
for it to really appeal i would definately save those two wicked features for nearer the middle so they dont get worn out too soon on in the track.

really nice work.

look forward to hearing your rmx of yahel in the comp. mines almost done now.

rich

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