Overall instrumentation sounded good. EQ was alright too. I thought the intro lasted a bit too long. Breakdown didn't really bring anything new, just another instrument playing the exact same notes.

I think this track has potential, but as it is it just sounds far too repetitive. There's no buildup, very little variations in tension, and no transformation of the main lead. There needs to be something different after that first breakdown.

i think the intro is pretty good. but when the bass comes in it loses its power almost immediately. I think you should work on the sound of the bass, make it more full, should probably dabble in the EQ'ing for the bass. The synth lead that comes in seems a bit too loud, overpowering the bass and the kicks. I do like some of the sound fx u use in this one. The bridge seems to drag on a bit too long too.

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I questioned the scholars and philosophers but He was beyond thair understanding.
I then looked into my heart and it was there where He dwelled that i saw him;he was no where else to be found."

--Jelaluddin Rumi

Allright, I will try to figure out a new melody that fits (and comes in during the break).

What do you guys think of the kick? I worked long on the EQ of that one.

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Can u guys tell mewhat's wrong?
The melody that comes in @ 1'25"... The high tone.... When I add Unision, the sound doesn't sound good, it's fake, out of tone, just irresistable! What's wrong? Unision added on Subtractor...

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