Very nice build-up, cool sounds and a nice groove. Cool pluck in the break, maybe work on the break some more, it's a bit short now, make it more interesing. The part after the break could also use some more interesting elements imo, it now sounds too much the same as the part before the break. Oh, and the kick could be a bit louder in the mix, hh's somewhat softer, but you said that yourself allready. Overall, i like the atmosphere of the track, you should definatly finish it. Good luck.

-Ron

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