Hey man,

This is awesome for a first track, well done on that

The first thing I feel you need to do to add extra depth to the track is bit more use on fx and panning, will really draw the listener's involvement in a bit more.

Try maybe highering the percussion volume a little bit to give the track more drive too. Try a bit more variation as you go through the song, it seems as though everything comes in blocks until they get repetetive then change to another block. Try and use some fx to give a bit less repitition. Some panning on the percussion would be a good idea in the last minute or so, its stuck a bit too much on the right.

You should be really proud with this as your first production though, it really has potential. Keep the work and practice up and I'm sure in no time you'll be turning heads with tracks.

I'm fairly new to producing myself so I'm not an expert but hope thats been of some help

yeah man, thx for the the pointers, yeah its tough as a newbie, there is such a steep learin curve... its ridiculous. Definitely gotta add more stuff to it, but thanks for the words of encouragement, u dont know how much that helps =).

cheers!

Hi there.
Ok..it's good for first attempt specially the sounds that you have.As for the structure is too repetitive and for me you have two ways to avoid it.1st try to make smaller the areas between puting new sounds and sequencers or 2nd leave it as it is and put some uplifting melodies or something different generall.
Hope I help you out.
Keep the good work man

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