hey all, this is a new piece ive been working on the last few days

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the tracks called 'Space Invader' and its got some pretty filthy basslines and very rhythmic percussion

would love any possible feedback,
cheers

Adam

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Hey u got a nice groove goin here. Nice work !

Peace

Jay

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agree... good groove going on there. Synth programming seems quite solid. Dont really listen to this sort of stuff but I'd say it qualifies as deep or dirty or whatever

3.03 is way too cheesy though. That melody must have been used a hundred times already.

Otherwise good stuff... might get more responses from it on house addict though!

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Originally posted by Axolotyl 3.03 is way too cheesy though. That melody must have been used a hundred times already.

i kinda thought this too at first, but I dunno its grown on me, i think its "fun"

thanks for the comments guys, always appreciated

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Production seems solid, synth design is alright.

However, I think this needs something more. Or at least it was me who needed more when listening to your tune. It sounds somewhat a little simple. Another percussive element, some pads, some LFOed background synth, maybe some more FX? There is still some space (haha) left in the frequency spectrum. Anything to make this more interesting is welcome.
Maybe you intended to keep this a little a little minimal?

I agree with Axo about the kinda cheesy melody

However you know what youre doing there and you did well, keep it up.

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hey man thanks for the feedback

yeh ive been mucking around with adding a dreamy pad in the track somewhere to change the vibe a little and then bring it back, tho I do like making my tracks quite minimalish, however I am working on something for it

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