The string thingy is too loud.
The lead is not full enoguh.
The bass is good.
The strings are nice.
The newer lead is much better.

3/5
Omer

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i dont like the intro so much, synthwork is thin. Break is also way to empty and thin but i like your climax, lead synth is quite banging though could be even more banging when its more full. Bassline is nice as well. Decent remix, especially main part but nothing new things added to the original which isnt beaten with this remix . Ok job though 6.5/10

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Thanks for the feedback guys.. just made this in four days time

I'll make some change again on the intro.. hehe

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Hey mate!

I think this is shaping up nice and powerful. Some sounds are a bit off though I think, perhaps still need some work.

I'm having a bit of trouble with the buildup fading and the break pads coming in, it sounds like they are perhaps just a little bit out of key?

Nice little variation on the main lead sequence

Cheers,
Wim

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Ooh that break - yes it is a little out of key - there is one note that is sending it out.

Havent heard the original so cant compare it (which could be a good thing)

I like the lead a lot, nice and energetic.
erm...what happens at 3:24? it seems to slur a bit -is that supposed to happen?

Anyway, overall it is a pretty good track - not sure if it would get signed but it sounds good anyway.

Good work!

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i like that flutey sound quite a lot nice melody

the drive bassline is really good IMO

i feel like there is still some EQ work to do, and the harmony change from the buildup to the breakdown strings was a bit strange.

i think this is your best job nevertheless well done

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@Icone: Thank you m8! glad it doesnt sux haha

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@Messiah Project: the 3:24 thing is on purpose hehe.. is it cool? haha

Thanks for the feedback again guys.. i think i will spend more time in the breakdown n EQ hehe

cheers!

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Last edited by DJ Dinz on Sep-19-2005 at 19:07

Like everyone else, pretty good over all needs some work on the intro good lead not bad breakdown. Spend a little bit more time on it and it will sound good. Haven't heard the original so dunno how they compare -- cheers

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