It's an alright track. I'd like to hear more percussive elements in it, perhaps some more metals. (you know how I am about metalics..hehe)

Transitionary effects wouldn't hurt either, I have troubles thinkin'
up ideas for that aswell hehe.

Also, i'd consider making it a bit shorter.
Personally, I'd be happy with a 6 minute track of this consistancy.

On a totally unrelated note,
I'm working on some kits and some pieces to send you for productions.
Keep churning out ideas, we'll come up with something great, im sure.

I'm working on a darker song, with the same minimalistic feel as my
"Come to me" remix, so if you have any ideas to toss into that kind
of a production than send 'em down.

Keep it up.