Hey Krivi,

Just listened to the track. It has a lot of potential:

- the bass is excellent, lovely driving bassline, quite excellent
- The mastering is top notch, a nice clear overall sound and every sound has its own place
- The build up towards is really good with nice sounds although a bit thin

A few pointers though:

- The build up itself feels a bit thin. the sounds you use are good but are a bit flat and backgroundish if you know what I mean
- The break is not really an earcatcher, too little happens for too long a time. The lead is pretty weak and therefore as soon as kick and bass kick in the track lacks a good lead and melody. It feels as if you have left out some major sounds in the track and that this is just the song structure.
- After 5.50 minutes you start with the build up again towards the second leadsection. Please do not do that unless the track has the power, energy and class to have us listeners yearn for a second lead There are far too many "build up-break-lead-build up-lead" tracks already

Keep it up mate ang again my compliments for the mastering, I love the clear well produced sound you have!

man, Nomen has given a good review.
I'll just add a few things...
I too like the bass line and your percs go great with it.
The backing synth is a tad quiet... the break is okay, but as mentioned not as much IMPACT as others out there. That vocal sample that starts each break (it sounds like a vocal but I know it isnt) is neat and does add an element of "freshness" to the track.

I think overall, the melody is okay but needs to be played by a better lead...something that grabs your attention more.

Good production so far, Krivi!

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Sounds promising this one, I like it way better than your Dreams-tune that has been released.

A little more energy, Otherwise awesome work.

quality is top notch - bass is driving - everything is clear - breakdown is pure sex - why aren't there more replies here?? lol Excellent work.

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congrats for your signing on total digital

bass is pretty solid, along with the percs ! i liked that "haah" vocal effect in the buildup, synth lines are nice, maybe a bit thin or low in volume.

the chords are very nice in the breakdown, it sounds a bit empty around 3:00 , im sure youre gonna find some little fxes to fill it up.

melody is very nice sounding great at 4:24

solid track, good work !

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thanx for replieas guys, IMO this track isn't nothing special i just played with some melodies and posted here...

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cant fault the production. very balanced sound with sparkling highs and a good bass.

im not a great fan of the melody or the synth sounds used for it. its not strong enough for the rest of the track and almost sounds like a submelody that would be behing a much stronger lead.

bassline leaves a lot of potential for another screaming lead melody ontop of what you already have.

wish i could put stuff as clean as this together. very pro

rich:]

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