nice melodies you got there...but you really got to work on the overall
quality. The mix is really thin (unmastered), the bass seems to be very weak. You really should turn up loudness of the bassdrum and bassline.

I really like the synth coming in at 1:27...


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Some nice elements here. I like the buildup, nice melody and i like what you did with the bass. Breakdown could be more interesting imo, i expected a lot more now. The climax is more of the same as before the break. It would be a lot better to introduce another melody/synth in the break to make the track more interesting, because now it sounds like one big too repetitive build-up.

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Hey Andy,

Just heard your track. It is a good effort. The song structure is how it should be. Good build up, break at the right time. But I agree with Romi, the break itself is quite thin and after the break nothing new happens, no new lead or leadsound. Try to make a new lead melody ,with a bigger lead sound and make the stringpads during the break a bit fuller.

Also I think all the sounds you use are a bit to thin. And the mastering could be improved as well so that the total sound gets a boost.


Overall the track is not bad because like I said the song structure is good and I can hear that you know how you want a trance track to sound.

Cheers!

Thanks for feedback peeps.

It's not that well mastered, its not my usual approach either since my pc was broke.

I think the kick needs to come through more.
I'll try and write up another melody / break it down slightly more.

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