It's been ages since I've done anything on Fruity. Well, was working on something and it developed into this. See if you guys like it...(I need the inspiration to finish it...haha!)

edit: fixed kick and bassline

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Last edited by azndragon0613 on Sep-23-2005 at 06:30

Like this one percussion is nice and gentle but detailed, synths are really good, loads of really good fx and extra sounds in there.

The one thing that stands out to me is the bottom end is a bit soft. I think the kick needs a bit more of a click to it - might help if it was turned up a little bit too. Also, it sounds like there's a bit too much reverb or too long a release on the bass but the sound itself is spot on.

Good work sir, I'd definately say you should carry on with it. If you tightened up the bottom end a little bit I'd definatley play it.

6.5/10 which could quite easily go up to a 7 or 7.5 (maybe an 8 if I'm feeling really nice) if you sorted out the aforementioned kick/bass

(Scale: 0 = don't bother, 1-3 = needs work, 4-5 = nearly there, 6-8 = releasable, 9-10 = outstanding)

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