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just be glad your name isnt lord of of bass.
Lol,
For the first track, that says not complete 1, the plucked has way too much reeverb, and the songs seems too dry and needs alot more, then again it isn't complete. Has some potential though.


Not Complete 2- Reminds me alot of the soundtrack for "Deus Ex"
The distortd synths developed very nicely. But it sounds kinda boring to me. I Don't know, it's just not my type of music. The bass changes are ounding real nice, they acompany the chord progressions. Good choice. Melody sounds nice after awhile. Piano sounds pretty original.
I think you need a heavier kick and clap. Something takes away from the volume, might be the low bit rate. I don't know.

Lectric ( The Next Big Club Hit)
Those are ome pretty tought words there.

Nicely planned out Snares, the digital sounds sound very anthemic as do the melody. Has a nice rave sound to it, but I definetly don't know about the attitude as far as The NExt Big Club Hit. MAstering is a little ackward and sounds botched up torwards the end. I can see where the energy is though.

Time Out.
Good beginnign to add atmosphere. But I keep feeling that lack of kick, it's simply not strong enough. THis track has a lot of ambient to it. It still needs that kick! The timing at which the snares come in is really off, and sounds unpleasant, sorry. The sudden change of melody jut doesn't sound good IMO. Some sounds are overflowing and overlapping and simply drowning out the kick, clap, and highhats. THe only way I can tell this is a trance song is because of the slight kick and melody, other than that this track needs to go back to production.
Needs tons of mastering work.

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Originally posted by Kris Xperiment just be glad your name isnt lord of of bass. Lol, For the first track, that says not complete 1, the plucked has way too much reeverb, and the songs seems too dry and needs alot more, then again it isn't complete. Has some potential though. Not Complete 2- Reminds me alot of the soundtrack for "Deus Ex" The distortd synths developed very nicely. But it sounds kinda boring to me. I Don't know, it's just not my type of music. The bass changes are ounding real nice, they acompany the chord progressions. Good choice. Melody sounds nice after awhile. Piano sounds pretty original. I think you need a heavier kick and clap. Something takes away from the volume, might be the low bit rate. I don't know. Lectric ( The Next Big Club Hit) Those are ome pretty tought words there. Nicely planned out Snares, the digital sounds sound very anthemic as do the melody. Has a nice rave sound to it, but I definetly don't know about the attitude as far as The NExt Big Club Hit. MAstering is a little ackward and sounds botched up torwards the end. I can see where the energy is though. Time Out. Good beginnign to add atmosphere. But I keep feeling that lack of kick, it's simply not strong enough. THis track has a lot of ambient to it. It still needs that kick! The timing at which the snares come in is really off, and sounds unpleasant, sorry. The sudden change of melody jut doesn't sound good IMO. Some sounds are overflowing and overlapping and simply drowning out the kick, clap, and highhats. THe only way I can tell this is a trance song is because of the slight kick and melody, other than that this track needs to go back to production. Needs tons of mastering work.

Thanks thats exactly what im looking for, I went over my two preview tracks and finished them up.

Timeout, I cant change at all because I produced it about three years ago and I dont have the stuff for it.

ha, yea I said the next big club hit, actually that was for HBP not lectric, but the reason I said that is because its similar to the intro track "confusion" in the movie Blade I.

and yes, my tracks are not mastered. I havnt mastered any of them, Im planing to have whatever record label I get soon to master them professionaly for me.

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Im intrested in knowing everyones opinions, so If you have the time please check them out so I know what I need to improve in.

Mike

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