This is one of my early tracks, a strange track with no particular style but a catchy melody.....I don't like programming drum tracks but I think I did quite well on this track....just a bit too much punch in the drum track what you think guys.

http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=11539

Thanx fellow trancies....

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On a personal level, I like it a lot, especially the vocals. It's very relaxing. But on a technical note, it sounds a bit muddy and on the low end (but I wouldn't trust my technical judgment because from my experience, I'm the worst when it comes to bass/mid/treble and overall EQ). I personally like the "bit too much punch in the drum"...gives it just a slight industrial flare to the song.

-jake
p.s. Listened to it about 3 times and it grew on me.

hey thanx jake......

it was one of those tracks I made a while ago, I got bored with it and almost gave up on it....your right about the muddy eq...that's headphones for you.

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I like that vocal a lot, guitars sound really cool, nice work. :)
lol at that pic you got on there with the shack.

Nice guitars.
I don't like the bass.
Nice vocals
Add more wetness to the piano.
It feels to dry.
Add a lot more percs.
The melody is nice.

But you need more elements.

5/10,
Omer

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sot on vocals sounds like da girl who sings in ratty 'sunrise'. can i ask who did do these vocals?

like da piano but agree it is a bit dry.

nice track tho has potential if da work is put in.

like a say....i lost interest in it like I do with many of my tracks. I may rewrite it becuase I do like the melody.

the vocals were from my sample collection...not sure where they are from though, I have that many scattered on my drive.

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Please, you have to let me remix this song .

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Originally posted by IDarkISwordI Please, you have to let me remix this song .

go for it.....I'm no good with drums and bass which is what it's lacking....a good thumping drum and bass line.

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