just listened to your track, this is quality m8! i love the breakdown, those pads are lush, the lead that comes in is well nice realy nice melodies, well produced, not really got any crits at all, very nice track! loving the bass

sounds excellent krivi - that kick is very nice - really thumping...i like the piccolo/flute sound...the track has an almost 'empty' sound which i like - the breakdown is well done too - with the pad coming in - nice synth at around 3 minutes - but some notes sound out of sync maybe - or it could be me - see what others say...but I think it is teh last note of the loop maybe - it comes too early...but the melody is great and the song is very professional sounding. Great work

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Hey Krivi,

This is very nice stuff. I really like the track. I am not really a fan of the kick though. It is very muffled and makes the production sound less clear. You could use a kick with a bit more high end.
Also the total mastering of the track could be better, the track is not clear at all.

Another pointer is you could use a bit more percussion in the track perhaps. It doesn't bother me that there hardly is any percussion but I think the track would get better if you did/


Anyways I loved the melodies and the break is quite excellent and original. So keep it up!

Cheers!

Sounds pretty damn good to me. Great motif and a really good theme throughout the track. Great selection of sounds and synth programming is solid imo.

I can see what Nomen means about the percs, but personally I like a good solid driving kick throughout a track. Actually the percs have that classic doof doof Armin sound. I wouldn't overcomplicate it myself and stick with what you've got.

The mastering isnt pro, but its sounding very listenable to my ears. Could perhaps do with some more stero spread in the upper bands but thats something thats easily done. The kick does seem to dominate, but I think thats a character of the track.

If I was to criticise anything, is that its a very predictable track... no surprises in store really. Not that its a bad thing really, but maybe something you want to keep in mind for future.

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Nice work mate.

In my opinion, a lot of the stuff you "amateur" producers create is much better than the average stuff the "professionals" do.

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Originally posted by krivi

nice pads. sweet highs. has on oriental flick to it that I really dig.

the bass is good.

The bass drum could be a little deeper. More THUMP would make this track killer!

2.50 this break is beautiful. nices tune. the bade runner meets oriental sytyle is really interesting.

3.40 nice laying when thy beat comes in. I still think you need to revise the bass drum. more bass!

great high hats.......



5.20 great rhythm. has a rob miles feel to it.

6.14 nice.

great work krivi

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thanx on your comments guys...

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Wow this is good trance, beautiful. Perfectly mixable too. Would it be okay if I put this in a set, please? Keep up the good work.
-Alex

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Originally posted by Salegon In my opinion, a lot of the stuff you "amateur" producers create is much better than the average stuff the "professionals" do.

+1! Totally agree with you there.

i dunno,you can do what you want with this 128kbps mp3 but that's not final version...

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