Sounded pretty good overall. I haven't heard the original, so it makes it hard to judge. I felt that the kick was a bit too loud, but then I'm not using my usual headphones, so it might just be me.

yes it sounds good, however, your track is missing a lot of "depth", you need more ambience, which can be achieved with the right use of reverbs, delays etc.
You need more percs, it seems like the only things i hear are your saws, kick and bass, you need to make it more interesting, a little variation at the end of every loop, cut off some frequencies before drop outs, stuff like that...

not bad

you need to take the bass off the kick though + change the delay on it. take out the sub + add a seperate syb. will make the bottom end so much fuller

get some more percs in there too

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