Hey,
I spend another night of intensive work on this track... "Dust Talk" sounds like really hard and fast DarkPsy in the vein of Cosmo now. Make sure to get this new updated version. I can say I feel extremely content with it.
Things I changed:
- structure has been heavily changed
- 1 new aggressive FM lead synth added
- tons of new FX
- fixed some transitions (less stops now)
- minor mastering issues
- bassline and kick a little better in the mix now
- overall tone of the track is much darker
- tried to give it more drive
- lots of work on small sections (slicing, etc)
Nice spooky intro .
like the filtered beat.
the filtering in is good but it sounds to dry when all stuff just dies.
the vocals are to dry and have to much background sound!
really like the lead you bring in .
really like what you do with the bassline l8r on!
some of the things are to abrupt in this tune, the tune is really dry at some parts.
you really have some nice things going on in this!
dont like the "offbeat" things. it sounds like if there is something wrong with the tune!
try to make it more "flowing".
really like the pad you bring in.
the break is "horror movie" scary ish . really like it ^^.
the break slicing was ok but i dunno what felt wrong!
i think the panning on the vocal was to extrem, the sounds just died on one side, sounded to abrupt.
really like the paddish lead!
you have alot of "sudden stops" wich makes the tune not flowing.
really like the "late lead" that comes in around 7:00 something.
the outro is nice!
nice track! but you should work on those fade ins etc.
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May-25-2006 13:39
avengie
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2005
Location: Brewster, New York
I got Scared when the Kick Started lol....
This is one wicked track for me.... im just starting to listen to psy... i like this one than the other demo alot...
Awesome i dont know much about psy to critique anything
Cheers
May-25-2006 17:07
Majutsu
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2006
Location: louisiana, usa
i can't get it to work and i really want to hear the new version i will try later maybe.
May-25-2006 23:28
Axolotyl
hired goon
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: atoms are not things they are possibilities
sounding good mate,
Clean & clear sounding. Bassline is a machine gun, loving it.
The signature cybernetica fx leads are in effect... good to see.
HPF rises on the bassline is nice. I like using the same effect myself... sounds killer
This reminds me a lot of High Cosmos. Killer techny dark stuff, I'm sure your familiar with him.
3.30 - climbing though the atmosphere here.
3.55 - getting some dark turbulence here... approaching breakdown.
5.00 - firing up again...
5.45 - pads are beautiful, huuuuge change here. This is true dark psy... mechanical digital and uplifting... love these sorts of changes in dark tunes.
6.48 - oh no... the machine has encountered errors and is rebooting?!
7.40 - this tune is full of surprises!!
8.30 - Yep, were in high orbit over planet boom... lol
Fuckin killer... everytime I think I'm catching up to your quality of production.. you go and pull tracks like this out of your ass... lol.. great stuff mate. Loved it all.
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May-26-2006 01:45
Axolotyl
hired goon
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: atoms are not things they are possibilities
btw: noticed your promo on psyreactor mate... good stuff!!
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May-26-2006 01:48
thoughtlessjex
Yakkity Yak
Registered: May 2004
Location: Chapel Hill, North Carolina
Nice intro.
Some of the opening glitches sound a little weird, rhythmically.
1:00 stop is amazing.
3:42 is weird, it's not like there's no rhythmic feel, but it's just hard to get into the groove of the transition.
8:49 to 8:54 is really neat. Then it gets into a cool ambient outro.
Pretty good stuff. Definitely better sounding than the last one.
I'm listening to the original version right now at the momento. *not the updated one*. The updated version is downloading. I will review that one as soon as it's done downloading. I just hope you kept the Star Trek, and Star Wars samples
OK starting out.
/me listens to cybernetika - dust talk2 [00:07 of 09:24m/320Kbps/44KHz]
Delicious ambience and weird time stretching sounds. Good stuff so far. Nice and dark.
OH damn. Definate structure change. LOVE the high pass filter in the beginning. THEN bam. Cut that bitch off. And you started already varying the bassline. Tweaky as fuck.
Good. Star Trek samples kept. Love the delay on the "US" very perfect.
Great FX so far. Nice creepy choral background from atmosphere. More tweaky rips and noises at 1:29
1:55 Great switch up, bassline varies more, and that distorted rip sound is more laid back. Sounds great.
2:21 Nice. Great throwing out the bassline for that quick break.
3:18 = Hot.
3:41 = Not sure about that. Are you using glitch to tweak things up? I think you might have said you were. It sounds really dope, maybe a little too harsh? But I think it fits in the track since it is pretty dark and evil sounding
4:09 Great. Brining everything out for some air. Subtractive mixing is great. Bringing everything out for the mix to punch through.
4:38 Good stuff. Open. And creepy.
5:04 US! Echo again. Great. Bringing back the nice rubbery bassline
5:53 I love that melodic ambience, blanketing the dark vibe of the track. That erie choral sound is awesome. 6:46 Oh boy. Back into the fray again, nice HPF. 6:58 Everything is broken down again. Minimal and dark.
Great track man. I do like the improvements. It's a lot more interesting now. Much improved.
Hey, thanks a lot for the great input guys, also for the first version. Really helped me a lot
I have been working on this again and improved the fills a little, still have a little trouble synchronizing them...
i really want to thank you for getting me into psy-goa, i really love your tracks and this version so much better then the original. the effects in your tracks are alway OMG. the dark pads in this one are really sweet.. when im listining to your tracks mostly at the dark parts i alway like to think.. "now! this is what represents me" lol. serious im a very negative person in real-life imo, but this isnt about my life.. this is about your music! there are no words of how much i like your style. keep up the producing mate!