Here's a project that I have been working on for about two weeks. I used many new synths and VSTi's although it's not fully done it needs some EQ and Mastering to be done. Might rework the break strings in a bit. I'm thinking about using Soundforge to master it. Who knows. Hope to hear your comments.


Cristian Fuentes-My Memories

128kbps
Lenght: 7:24
2 Weeks in Production (And Continuing)

Link:
http://s56.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...D93EVCPFN23GUDL

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

not bad m8. I'd say add some more bassline and thicken the tune up a bit. lemme know how it goes

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You we're right on target with that, having added a thicker bassline would give it more a drive. Thanks for the suggestion, will do.

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

lovely melodies man !

great intro too.

i'd say overall that bassline and some of the synths need beefing up

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Merci merci mon ami! I am actually adressing the bassline problem!

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

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Originally posted by staticblue lovely melodies man ! great intro too. i'd say overall that bassline and some of the synths need beefing up

I second that Really a nice track here mate, but the track sounds a bit thin still. Also I think the break is a bit too long Definately need work on the bass especially during the leadsection. A nice full bass will make sure the percussions glues better to the track. Also during the leadsection try to add a nice full stringlayer on top of the lead or something like that, to give the whole more body. Just a suggestion, it might sound good

In potential this is a great track!

Thank you for listening to the track and giving me constructive criticism, it really brightens my day whether it be good or bad! Because it helps me improve myself. I agree with every 1 here there is a feeling on emptyness as far as the synths go. I think the climax is missing some strings in the background, bassline does need more of a boom to it, I believe raising the lower end freq's might do the trick. Same applies for the subbass doesnt it?

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

hmm I think it sounds pretty good how it is!!
after the second listen I have to agree with the bassline.. and im missing some drive after the climaxbuild. maybe add a 4x4 hihat?
you the one that goes like tiggatshtiggatshtiggatshtiggatsh
strings sound really good but imo I would bring them back a bit.. lower the volume just a little bit.
But this song has potential man! Im definitly going to keep my eye open for this one.

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I've been getting alot of people telling me about this track and the bassline! It's been fixed as far as that goes and I totally get what you mean by the highhats! Thanks for the incitive review and comments. These help a great deal!

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

The song is awesome dude.

And congrats on selling your soul to Dance Industries lol j/k

Ne ways I tried to do something on FruityLoops but there so much things on the program that I dont so I cant make ne thing good.

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Originally posted by staticblue lovely melodies man ! great intro too. i'd say overall that bassline and some of the synths need beefing up

I concur with static, you are sounding every time better, I remember one of your tracks some months ago and this sounds pretty better, keep it up man .
Kopi =o.

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Loving this sound, great sound quailty, clear melodies, well done percussion. Lots of creative synth work, harmonizing is really clear.