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sounds quite interesting...
however, I feel with this kind of genre, it just feels like it needs a massive buildup and breakdown to get things going somewhere...
I find the pitch changes near the end to not sound too good, might want to consider taking that out a bit...
bass, and percussion are sounding good, nothing wrong with it... I like the continual evolving of the melody, keeps the listener more interested. However, I feel there needs to be more elements in this track...
Keep working at it... and I feel that it just needs another massive lead melody to carry the track through a massive breakdown and buildup
Good work mate.
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