Very hard to tell just being able to listen to the low bit rate but it sounds like it has a lot of energy.
Melody is perhaps a little to bouncy sounding for my liking but overall sounds good from what I can gather.

Cheers
Nem

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Hi M---

The first part of this track reminds me of a swedish Prog rocker from the 70's called The girl and the crow... and I loved that tune as a kid. I agree with nem about the bounciness of the melody... a bit too much... Overall i'd give you 7 - 7.5 out of 10

Your Friendly ghost of Mozart

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hehe thank you for your responses

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HEHE BOUNCY.. lol .. its driving.. my music may be a bit energetic for the mellow crowd..

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quote:

Originally posted by Nemesis44 Very hard to tell just being able to listen to the low bit rate but it sounds like it has a lot of energy. Melody is perhaps a little to bouncy sounding for my liking but overall sounds good from what I can gather. Cheers Nem

there is a high quality version there as well

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quality of production, melodic elements, moving bassline, drive


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the boom sound, the clap sound


recomendations: great tune, I really enjoyed its bounce and drive. Thought the boom sound got a bit overdone, and the clap sound doesn't really fit in with the whole arrangement. Those are only minor elements compared to the overall sound that i think is very well produced. you've come a long way- keep it up.

I am still waiting for your traxx to add to my set dude.. pm me on msn..

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Pretty decent track there mate. Its got that somatic sense vibe that I love. Driving, lush and epic.

The lead is a tad thin. Almost there, but maybe a bit too much ressonance to it.

I like the bass patch you've used too and those big down sounds on the breaks are pretty well done but yeah, maybe use it a bit more sparingly.

Melody takes a turn for the worse at 4.12. It just doesnt feel quite as on the beat for some reason and generally the track gets a bit muddy here.

Nice work though. Arrangement and feel of the track is spot on.

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