kinda weird track i must say hehe
weird structure too, take alot of time for something to come..
the break is also weird heh and too long
its kinda hard to say what's the main part here, if there is one?

anyway, i can hear you got some good production skills, got nothing really to complain about except of few samples that didnt sound good to me, and about the structure, mm..
maybe its just not my style, but sounds really weird to me hehe
anyway i think adding some melodies and more interesting stuff will make it alot better cause its kinda mono.. nothing is really changing in this 5 minues..
goodluck man

hi,

I like the weird noises in the background in the beginning.. creates a cool atmosphere.

I think the kick has too much "boing" to it... know what I mean?

There are some cool ideas in this song - but I think some of the sounds need some touching up, and a little work on balancing the levels.

Good use of fx! the groove at the end is well done.

Keep it up,
Trev

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