Hi guys, here is one of my tracks - i would appreciate some constructive appraisal! I produce using Cubase SX3, Reason, and a bunch of VSTi (mainly) Hypersonic. Below is the link to my profile at MP3 Unsigned.

http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=8864

The song starts as soon as you arrive, and you can download it from there. I have not finished this yet, and it needs proper Waves mastering treatment.

Thanks for listening!
Moochy
http://moochysphere.blogspot.com

well you said it wasn't finnished and yea needs some work. check your key signature first and make sure you've got that covered, your sounds are all over the place and it sounds chaotic and progressive or not- still uncool. the rythm is good, but a tad repetitive. bass line is instrumentationaly sounding good, but melodicaly moving me to insanity... instrumental structure is there and the track has potential, now you need to work on composition. good luck