DL it now, will give my thoughts about it as soon as possible

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allright here`s my opinion:

-the vocal on the beginning is nice
-the bass, that comes after the vocal is a bit to loud, because of that you can`t hear the drums so good
-the synth that starts at 1.56 is very nice, but could be a bit `fatter`
-the strings at 3.12 are good!
-allmost forgot! the `piuw` thing that falls together with the kickdrum doesn`t sound good, think you could leave that better

hope you`ve had enough

greetz,

DJ Mantis

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Hey there

Thx for the comments! I'll think about it in the near future.
I'm refining my tracks more & more to give them a more finished feel.

There are people who like the 'phiuw' effect though, so maybe I'd let it stay?

Anyway, thx & take care!
Wim @ LW

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ok, maybe you should tweak it a bit, or add some more depht in it

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Originally posted by mantisnl ok, maybe you should tweak it a bit, or add some more depht in it

Ok; I will think about it, thx
see you later!

LW

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Will check it out FS. Dunno exactly what you mean by emotional trance but if it's what I think you mean... I'll probably get wasted near my stereo listening on loop

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Originally posted by oDrori Will check it out FS. Dunno exactly what you mean by emotional trance but if it's what I think you mean... I'll probably get wasted near my stereo listening on loop

Hehe
No, you won't drop dead near your stereo though
It's just that it has a very 'moving' melody... The original had too.

Take care!
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Originally posted by oDrori Will check it out FS. Dunno exactly what you mean by emotional trance but if it's what I think you mean... I'll probably get wasted near my stereo listening on loop

please have a look people!
thx for your time... always

best greetz,
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hmm guess this won't work here

how can you make people wanna hear your music??
Anyways, I do forgive you

Best greetz, Wim

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