Hi,

Working on a tune that was never finished but aiming to do that soon. More work needs to be done and a mastering job levels etc but i will come to that later. See what TA thinks.

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Updated, i have added a new arragement in the second breakdown and encoded a 160kps sample.

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Terry

Last edited by rqpeyruxvg on Oct-23-2005 at 07:34

Hey Terry.

First of all, thank you for this solid track. But why is the quality soooo bad?
Like the baseline and the drum. But maybe it´s a little bit to dry all the time. You should try to bring a little bit more difference into the drums.
I love this breakdown with the bleepy melodies. Feels like flying.
And then your main melody is real lovely. Too sweet for this planet.
At all I would give you a very good 8.5 from 10 points for this one, because I felt in love to your melodies.

Notice: I need a 192 kb/s version of this one.

Regards, Rock.

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production-wise it all sounds good to me. decent break too, but I kinda expected more afterwards. The melody sounds too average, didn't really catch my attention.
sorry =)

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This is a good track no doubt.

Nice melody but I can't help but feel that perhaps it needs another element to complement what you have there (Personal opinion though).

The way the beat comes in is good. Bags of energy.

I like this track and always feel that it's never right to be too critical of artistic content but look more at the technical side, and I can't fault you there.

Good job

Cheers
Nem

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Tuned.

Hmmm, these pads are very nice, i like the notes
Good background synth you got fading there.
Nice bassline.
Around the 3:00 mark, you need some background effects to keep it interesting.
Can't fault the breakdown.
Brilliant climax.
As someone else said, the main melody is very sweet.

This is definitely your best track yet, production wise and music wise. I think you need to improve on effects though, maybe some reverse percs. Maybe add a small section of breakbeat in the track aswell.

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Thanx Guys,

Im thinking on putting a bit more melody into it and actually finishing this and attempting a good master. What are your thoughts of signing? iv never tried that before...

Listening,

nice warm pads! Maybe your kick can use a layer? more mid maybe..
Nice buildup to! Really love the sines playing at the background.
Your bassline sounds perfect imo! Great variation. And yeah, maybe add some more perc?

This is really a great track!

keep it up!


btw, is this the answer to deep dish' - say hello?


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*edit* What did u used for creating this track? Hard/ software?
wich? really like your lead.

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Hi Terry,
It's a bit hard to reviwe the track on 96kbs...I assume you did it so no one will take the track...Maybe next time try to export it on 192 then take it into Cubase/Logic/Fruity and just place fade in/out in certain parts of the track.
Anyhow from what I can hear the track sounds wonderfull but I'd make the kick a bit more bassy and give the track is self a bit more bass aswell, ie at 5.07 when the main part comes in the main synth is a bit screamy for my taste.
The track structure is very cool but I don't know maybe it's me but I feel like it lacks a bit more intresset, it's like it goes on playing the same part over and over.
Over all I'd say it's good just lack's those finishing touches.
Good work. =)

Thankz for the replies.

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Originally posted by teknasia *edit* What did u used for creating this track? Hard/ software? wich? really like your lead.

I used software, FruityLoops, Few Vsts...

Ok, I have updated the composition and added a second arragement in the final breakdown, also encoded in a higher KPS as requested. See what you think.

Humm...
Kopi =o.

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Originally posted by kopi_luwak Humm... Kopi =o.

Lol, i wonder who has done that before