I have listened to your track.

What I don't like is
- Track is not 4/4. Go for 4/4 and it will be better
- Strings volume is too high
- Lead sound
Add some more melodies or energy to the track (on your choice) and some more synths.
Maybe you need software or hardware upgrade? (Like me).

All - IMHO

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Hi

Kick and bass are deep, nice sounds, im not to keen on the synths at the startup. percussion work is improving Kid!. maybe buildup the track slower?.

The melody is very simplistic compared to your last production, it really sounds like something iv heard before, is this a remix? - The melody needs work.

Keep it up!

The pluck synth sounds pretty good, it sounds like 80ies (video games, sci-fi movies...such good years :rolleyes
The only things I don't really like is the string synth sound, maybe the VST plugin "Absynth" would make a proper one (I think just a Pro53 with some effects produce good ones).
The compression effet on it is interesting, it brings more rythm to the track but I think the output level is a bit high and makes a small clipping effect (I'm not sure about it, I just have earphones just now).

At 3'30, I would have appreciated more "jungle" (just one among loads of free jungle samples would sound nice I guess).
I liked when the drums/hats are filtered appart from the synth, it should be so longer.. to introduce a 'tuti' (I don't know the english word, it's when you heard all instruments)

thanks for all the comments.
terry: yeah its a remix on the early 90's track infinity by Guru josh.

more comments still welcome!

not a bad mix of that track. that was a good tune in its day lol.

love the remix.

did you download the sample?

haha yeh it was a classic i think .

Nah there's no samples in it.

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Originally posted by Kid_presentable haha yeh it was a classic i think . Nah there's no samples in it.

Cool stuff, i admire the sound of it, the second part is full of energy in the track too. your productions are improving and ill be on the look out in future. go you

thanks mate

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