Hello everybody-
I'm kinda new Ive never really posted and I'm just slowly starting to give feedback to others as im learning more about producing.


I really have no idea what genre this would fall in and some feedback would be greatly appreciated you guys seem to know what you're talking about so I'd appreciate whatever anybody can say..it could be trance it could be breaks it could be house i really have no idea i havent been into dance long enough to figure it out..

anyways its an mp3 its around 9 minutes i believe and any feedback would be a big big big help...


and once again hello to everybody.
hanan.


link:


http://s45.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...451EXYP4G6QELYH

This isnt too bad for a first track!

Your kick is really weak, but thats a very difficult thing to get right. So worry not, with practice and the use of board like this to ask for help and things like that, I think you'll do alright. Just keep working on things, and don't give up mate!

Talent ,this is uplifting for me....prgressive,cool work.
try channels EQ work,track has much potential...keep going!

try toreview my new track

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...484#post5298484

Hey,
this sounds pretty good. I like the intro that's atmospheric and just draws you in. The depth is what I always look for in a production and you definitelly have that. Try playing around with different elements to make it even more interesting...cutoff frequency works wonders here.

hey thanks for the feedback so far I really appreciate that...!

Yeah as far as the kick goes I was always trying to get it to blend into the track as much as possible by placing it in an odd spot of the mix and then when I listened to it on a different system it actually seemed like it was too loud so I guess i turned it down just a lil bit too much-




but thanks for the feedback i really appreciate it if anybody else would give me some too that'd be great otherwise ill just throw this one away and keep moving



hanan

weak kick +1

wats that vocal signum ft scott mac - coming on strong?

sounds like you've sampled it.

very nice atmospheric feel.

nice percs.

good job

thanks yah i dunno whats goin on with that kick on some systems it sounds good and on some it sounds weak i guess i would just change it all together if anything..


and yeah i def sampled signum thats tight that u recognized that i also sampled an old kung fu movie in that breakdown

its a fantastic sample. were did you get it from anyway?

if you make the changes that track could be a winner. sounds great apart from one or two minor things.








Listen to my track


http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=14KORG4ZRQJ803OGDIAUR3KYHC

yeah i just sampled it from the original and pitched it..

is there a limit to the amount of tracks i can post?

nope