Hello,I'm back,
this is my new track,maybe you could suggest Is the kick too hard/luod,and main melo is'nt too industrial..I'f you enjoy this piece,let me know,comments are wlevome !

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Last edited by linkmage on Nov-20-2005 at 20:41

This is really good man, but it needs a bassline. there isnt much lower freqs in the track. You have a low sound, but it's not really a bassline. Something lower is needed, with little harmnics. Some of your melodies sounds off key in a bad way like that main lead. Probably because it is hiting 5ths or something, just make the synth be on melody cuc the 5th thing really bothers me.

But on the plus side, you really have a great stereo field.

Oh you know what a bassline kinda comes in closer to the end thats cool. SO i guess you do have a bassline going on, maybe bring it in sooner.

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intro, nice synths and effects. percussion is a bit simple for now. I have to agree about the bassline. Nice Phatt synths in the breakdown and sounds as 5ths, im my opinion it does fit. I like the thins pads.

Keep working at it.
Good attempt.

thnx for comments...more?

You have a lot of pretty cool effects in this.

Your bassline has potential, but I think atm it's a little bit too simple.

I'm not sure how tech trance structures are meant to be, but that seems to be lacking, although I may be wrong bc of my aforementioned reason, but if that's fixed I reckon this could have a lot of energy.

At 5mins-ish, sounding pretty good, but I agree, maybe add some more percussion.

And of course GL!


Vesh.

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Cool sound! But not really my cup of tea. The brake was really long and when the kick started it just sounded the same again. Add some more elements... but i dont know what...

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I'm Loving the energy and all the atmosphere. It has a little breakbeat influence! The air sounds that come in make me feel like Im actually flying intoa state of trance

I need to know what strings you used at 1:04 in the backgound they sound simply godlike.
The hight hat work is Professional. The track has a lot of drive. My only complaint is that I think it needs a faster bassline. But thats my opinion. Melody is original I always loved your meodies especially for Gator (My Favorite track)
Break is very well produced. Mastering sounds good. Nothing overflowing.
at 3:47 there is a build up but it doesnt have an explosive release. I think a nice energy explosion would be great there. To have an explosion sound at 3:46 to clear the air. Just my Opinion.
Good work though. Original, fresh , new catchy and energetic.

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