jasonf - crystal

ok i did this a few months ago for fun and thought to share it and get some feedback. its a groovy / acid / prog w/e house track. im not really happy with its structure and there are still alot of things that can be improved but since i cant produce till i fix the computer, here it is. enjoy and give me some feedback



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EDIT 2: removed it from yousendit to an other host, and updated the link.

jasonf - crystal

Last edited by dj jasonF on Dec-08-2005 at 03:22

nice beat.

little panned 'frog croak' sounds are great! it gives the track a real original sound.

not sure of the 'electrical' synths from around the 1;00 mark...


overall id make the track even more 'dub' and get rid of some of those melodies. they give the track a 'cheap sound' in my opinion

i recon the track sounds great around the 7;20 mark. minimal but full.

nice track with cool little original features.

rich

check my thread if you have time

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Originally posted by richg101 nice track with cool little original features.

thanx mate that was my intention. im prob gonna make another mix and change the main melody, it doesnt really fit the track .
and im gonna make it more.. minimal or something.

listening:

good kick, i dig the groove in this one.. nice sounds all over.. got nothing more to say actually.. enjoyed listening to it

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Hey!!

Yeah as Subtle said the kick works really well... the groove is allright, the percussions are well done. The sound effects are pretty cool but I think there are too many at the same time. It´s difficult to understand what´s happening in the track. It´s somewhat chaotic... You´ve got an original sound and the beat is really good. The break at around 3:20 starts too suddenly... you should put at least a drum fill before it. Also the structure of the track is not too logic but maybe you intended it that way. Good effort though!

Cheers, Lakeus

minimal, and once you adjust to the pace of that rythm, it starts to grow on you... like when the bass comes in, but something in me wants some deeep dark bassgroves on top of this... gets a bit boring after a while because the speed of the groove doesn't seem enough to drive the track, but overall I think you did a good job with this experiment.

@ Lakeus i know what you mean theres a white noise arpegio (not really audible.) maybe it needs abit eqing.

thanx guys

what can i say... i LOVE the beat, its never boring very original

but the sound fx do kill the track somewhat....and i cant make out a melody anywhere really.....

but awesome none the less

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what can i say... i LOVE the beat, its never boring very original

but the sound fx do kill the track somewhat....and i cant make out a melody anywhere really.....

but awesome none the less

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