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Hi Heather,
It's not bad at all.
Few points for me though,
The Bassline is a bit unimaginative but I guess for the sake of keeping the overall mix nice and spacious it does the job.
The sounds overall are well balanced and it's a pretty clear mix so well done on that part.
I did feel that whilst it's a nice melody I would perhaps liked to have seen something more going on in the track to give it a bit more drive. Perhaps a bit more percussion or another complementing bassline.
What did you use to make the arp? It's a nice sound and wouldn't mind knowing what you used.
Overall I think you have a good result and it was nice to listen to it. So keep up the good work.
Cheers
Nem
PS
Don't be put off by the fact that some of the juveniles don't know how to act in front of a lady. 
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