hi,i hav'nt put a song on here for a while and this is one of the songs off my latest album, its very much in the MIKE/Push style of trance imo,who is a producer i really admire..

..feedback appreciated

Download it here >> http://music.mp3lizard.com/adam_rodriguez/

Or right click & 'save as' >> Adam Rodriguez - The Perfect Light

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Thats a powerful kick going on there maybe a little to much! Is it just one track it kind of cut of at about 9:30 which is way to long. But it did sound good bit wired in parts, cool well done

Choc

the kick is supposed to be powerful altho i might turn it down bit,hehe....i cut it off at 9:30 to keep it under 10 MB for the host....its real length is 10:46! All my tracks are quite long cos i aim to take the listener on a journey,or something like that

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You have a good idea here but your sounds are very bad.
(Buy a virus or JP8xxx)Its worth it if you want to sound pro.
As soon as you get better a getting your sounds where they need to be you'll be a great producer just like M.I.K.E.

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Cheers for the comment....I think the main reason it sounds bad is because i had to reduce it to 128 Kps to host it - its nothing like the 320 Kps version! And im using Logic Pro 7 which Armin uses among other famous producers , so i hope i can get some sort professional sound out of it..

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big powerful beat but too loud i think. it eats up too much headroom.

atmospheric melodies are great! they have an emotion about them that reminds me of a track mike would play. there is a 'border community sound but faster' vibe about the track. but also its got some push - 'blue midnight' in there.

hi hats mayber loads more volume to them.

long deep buildup... nice enough to support the length it is.

break. mixed feelings about the vocal. sounds almost computer game ish. like the female vocal in halo

melodies are dark and deep! woa! they re creepy!

kick comes back. i can imagine playing this! its a nice set starter. sort out the levels of the kick and percs and you ll have a great track!

7;33 sounds nice but it almost sounds like a dj is mixing in another completely diffent tune. the whole key has changed.. not sure about that little change..


overall i see what you mean about your 'journey'.. i went on one while listening to this

keep it up

rich

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cheers for the comments rich,the vocal sample i put in is actually from the Kill Bill soundtrack - a bit of Uma Thurman! I think it adds to the dark atmosphere..

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thanks for the comments palm,i think i need to go on a mastering course or something because i just cant get the finished mix sounding that professional when all the different sounds come together...i need all the percussions,basslines,kick etc to sit in their own space...my songs are sounding better tho from the start of the year

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The link is not working

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...it should be - just click on the first link...sometimes the 'right click & save as' doesnt work with some people..

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hey adam.

i been listening to your tune loads and love the break. please can i do a rmx of it? its got loads of potential for a rmx..

if you can id love the break section as a wav. but without the kill bill sample? any chance?

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Heres the full 320 kps version.....

Adam Rodriguez - The Perfect Light (Original Mix)

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