Hey, fiberline wanted me to start on some Progressive House, and well heres my first attempt. I'd appreciate any comments I can get.

linkey linkey <---click

Thanks TA,

William Vance

Hey man, I liked this heaps better than your untitled.mp3 one I just listened to.
Love the deep bass and the way the tune builds up its layers. Some more work on the percussion would add heaps!
The synths are very cool and almost goa-like. The one coming in at 1:30 is exactly what I'm talking about, nice vibe there.
It's all got a nice relaxed groove. Keep it up!

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Monsoon - Astrosurf

This one sounds awesome so far, I really like it a lot. Love the sub-bass and the ethnic percussion. Pads sound great as well. Only thing it sounds like it is missing thus far is an ethereal melody on top. Great job on this!

Wholy crap, thx for the replies... And thanks for liking it, however the second progression I added, I don't seem to like, nor the melodies... But if they sound good to you guys its cool, and I also think the pads kinda overpower it... Then again this is my first progressive house attempt, and I may still be in my "Trance" mindset.

William

yea im not really liking the melodies, but do like the percs and the fx. i'm seeing that the wav form hits square like proportions almost throughout the whole song- maybe a sign of clipping, though not positive on that. I think with a different melodic vibe the perc/background would work well keep going

Hey,
Hello dude, check out ur kick, it has hiss in the end of the sample, u can fix it with the emvelope or puting a filter over it because sounds dirty.
The build up is a bit basic imo, you can expect all the evolution.
In overall is going good but it needs some work, try to add some drum loops to the background, but considering is a beta I am sure final version will be way better, keep ous updated and keep it up mate .
Kopi =o.

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Last edited by kopi_luwak on Dec-15-2005 at 03:49