Its not my newest but very recent. I think I improved my mixing and mastering, and the song is more structured musically. Anyways please listen and drop your thoughts.
http://www.rave.ca/users.php?id=4583&track=2493

Last edited by gr8ape on Jan-02-2006 at 18:28

Comon what the hell, 30 views no comments, im bumping this once, hoping theres not only lazy people here.

I like the track, but it's definitely not just trance. I'd give it more of a Goa-Psy trance feel. I like all the different sounds and elements you bring in to make the track soar. Great job I like it.

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Intro synth is great, I like the energy it has, definately a good stepping stone. The kick is vicious but at the same time its great. I gave up on trance a long time ago but this is the sorta stuff I liked, especially with an addictive kick like that alongside the tough riffs.

Quality stuff mate, reminds me of J. Walker (not sure if the names right or got right person ). If this is the kind of stuff you're making, I'd love to hear more. Best stuff i've heard on this board in a long time, especially trance-wise.

Whoa mate, excellent track you got there. Instantly fell in love with it.

Nice intro, maybe use a different (softer) kick in the introduction.
That deep sharp synth, is it supposed to be your bass? I think it needs way more bottom to it to really be a bassline. Otherwise cut the lowest frequencies of it and add a deep (sub) bassline, maybe that should do the job better.
Great lead synth then!
Even better lead sound @2:01. Works extremely well with the background stabs. Now the track is really getting interesting.
Even a new lead. Reminds me pretty much of Infected Mushroom now. You checked Frost-Raven's tracks? Hes one of the users here on the board and you two got a similar style
Nice, now @4:00 and again you change the atmosphere. I really love this passage, it is twisted. Plus it shows a great mastering, the sounds really work as a unity while everyone of them is crystal clear.
5:22 awesome buildup. Whoa!
That lead is just badass, and you cosntantly keep changing it, eliminating any chance for it to get repetitive.

All I can say now is: Great job! Keep it up

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The fact that you said it reminded you of infected mush pretty much made my day haha. thx for the comments guys

beginning-I feel the energy..oh yeah thats cool
0:27-0:13 I think this part is'nt good after cool beginning
awesome track...I like your mushroom melodies and ACID synths...
maybe too long,because in the middle track starting smell with monotony...ending is fantastic!
9.5/10
cool touch
great work
greetz

Not a bad effort at all. I quite like the lead sounds and the buzzing electronic fx. Melodies are nice and abstract like a good goa tracks should be. At times the percussion left me wanting a bit more though. It felt really lonely in some places.

Nice atmospheric change at 4 minutes. Good rhythmic synth work there changes the groove substantially. Nice work.

Structure of the track reminds me of Pleadians.. that sort of really long drawn out goa that doesnt mess around. Overally, really good synth programming and you've managed to produce in a style that was abandoned long ago. Mastering favours the mids a bit too much for my tastes, but works well for this sort of track.

Hey, check the track in my sig if you get a chance

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