The lead needs more center is right. I believe the eq on the lead is alright. The sound is pleasant to the ears if that's what you're looking for. I like it all. The drums need something else but I'm not sure.

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thanks. I think I'll just create a mono send and send some of the lead to it.

what monitors are you hearing it on?

nice i like.

a piano solo before that with a slow build up of beats would be sick

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well if i do put in a piano solo I just got Akoustik Piano so it will be damn nice.

Melody is to obviously ripped

what track? have a link?

Ralph Novell - Wrong Love

Well I investigated this and I found out the following.


Red=my lead Black=wrong love

I transposed the key to match up and the first 8 bars seem to not match up but your are right, the last 8 bars do seem to match up alot. Of course their rythms are completly different and I go off the pattern a bit on some of the notes.

I'm wondering if I should use it or not. I really like my work but i don't want to conflict with another track. Don't think is similar enough for anything legal to happen but of course as you pointed out, it may look lifted.

I donno man it is really similar. It sounds like a remix of wrong love to me. Good job making something similar though, that's a good track.

Well I am going to go ahead and use it but maybe modify it a bit in the last 8 measures.

Shit happens ;-)

I'm not familiar with the other track, but I think your track so far is awesome. I look forward to hearing it with bass, pads, and effects.

My only suggestion is more effects on the lead. Personally I would add more delay and reverb, at least at certain parts.