thought i'd share this with you all still a lot to do, the mid sections are there atm just to give me an idea of where to go, but will be modified drastically, but still I would really love some feedback on this as it is

http://homepages.nildram.co.uk/~dr3...owwearefree.mp3

Last edited by dr3amz on Dec-23-2005 at 22:19

listening to it right now.......wow.....can't really find anything to pick apart....mixdown is great. very laid back.

if anything i would say do some kind of lead part with that whiny, light, pluck sound in the break.

other than that...wow again...i like it.

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thanks for the feedback il - anyone else?

yes nice mellow tune, i like it. love the bass

im sure you could refine it more, but it sounds ok as it is..

Last edited by mickb1 on Dec-24-2005 at 11:32

well needs a lot of work still, the parts after the chorus's are just temporary, the breakdown will stay but be worked on more tho.

tough crowd?

nice melody, easy listening stuff =).

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Great atmosphere carries this track along, sounds and pads give it a walking progressively sound. Wow, the melody is one of kind. You have to finish this. Although the bass seems static and has that basic 4- beat it kind of compliments the melody. Is there anyway to innovate with that bass? Perhaps give it a nice slightly distored bass, just a suggestion.
Excellent structure. Put everything in its place and you have a good trance track

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glad you like it the 4/4 bass will be changed on the intro part (just some variation etc) if you notice it gets killed at the 2nd chorus for something a bit more trancey

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I know this may seem like a weird way to judge tracks.... but I tend to like tracks I can imagine driving to or playing a racing game to and I could picture myself playing tokyo racer with this in the background. In other words, cool stuff so far.

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