anyone?

This aint that bad, got over the writers block I see, plenty of ideas in this.

Drops in too quick at the start, but I guess its a shortened cut, so you could easily extend it.

Melody is nice and understated. Kinda feels just like an intro, so you could take it a lot of different ways for sure.

Definately got that melodic feel to it, so maybe swap the lead for something a bit more punchy later on in the track. I would say you could add more percussive elements and short breaks here and there.

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thanks for the reply

It sounds nice, brother...better than any of my stuff. Keep it up!