Hey,
Listening ..... First thing I noticed, the drums, the kick, I would use another sample, comes with some hiss, try to emvelope it, and ur snare, sounds very weak, u need to compress it a bit, and to add reverb, because sounds to into the background for me . Bass line is cool, Fx also, that synth that appears is nice, The pads are great.
In overall, is a good remix, but I would work more with the Drums, above all the Snare and the Kick, but above all the Snare, also I would give more dinamics to the synths, good work mate keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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Thanks alot kopi

i will work harder on the drum & snare.

cheers!

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Hey mate,
I would look at your kick drum sounds it could be a bit diffrent to fit in the mix, You have some great Ideas here. Your lead sound could use some work and your pads are weak but good job man keep it up

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not crazy of the rythm that comes in at 1:25, sounds really intrusive for what kind of song it is (to "in my face")
what came in at 3:30 made F#CK'N CHILLS go through my hole body.
great track.
Good extension from the original

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quite solid basslines =) i think your offbeat basssynth could be processed a bit more, it sounds a bit dry (maybe a bit too loud too !)

the synth coming at 1:30 is a bit too loud too IMO, it covers all the percs

overall you have improved your sounds alot since your last track

strings a bit thin
i loved that melody, lead is a bit too harsh to my taste though.


good job!


static

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cool track, mate!

quite enjoyed listening to it!

great melody!

cheers,

Peter

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good remix..

could have added some bongos in it, but else its great..

nice strings there on the end.. the clap could use some power though

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Thank Q.. Thank Q

I will get the drum & Clap fix... will update the mix soon!
Thank to all for listening & comments

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As I'm listening work on the percs in the intro a bit compress and such. I think the clap could use a little bit of eq and reverb. And that that lead that comes in at around a minute and a half needs the levels dropped or something I don't know. Strings sound pretty good but maybe add a chorus or something. The lead that comes in after the strings is nice m8! But overall good track just work on a few of the little things and I think it will sound good.

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Update it.. fix my problem.. hope it is nice !

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I like this remix, you've done a great job. Can't critically analyse it as my headphones are broke. But I enjoyed it, would you mind me playing it on my radio show?

8/10