I'm not quite sure what the point of all this is...I am assuming you are a budding graphic designer and you are asking us to look at your work?

In that case, I like the composition of the 2nd pic as well as the font. The art seems a little misplaced, but then again, I'm not quite sure of what context you are trying to achieve all this in.

A little more information might help the voting process, if you care...I dunno though, you might be "just F-ing around".

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yeah, I’m trying to be a graphic designer, and this is some stuff I did yesterday real quick, there is no real point to this other than to see how I did in other peoples eyes, the second one that you speak of was made from another flyer, the image they had was the rifle, helmet and boots, so I assumed that they were going for a fallen soldier style. When I remade the flyer there was too much white space so I filled it in with some drawings, they don’t really fit in to what I was going for, but I was trying to keep with the original idea that was presented.

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The first one's font could really use some adjusting

i like the red one

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Originally posted by Sunsnail The first one's font could really use some adjusting

How so? like the font i used or the coloring should be lighter/darker

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j.A. Cambece

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Originally posted by cambece How so? like the font i used or the coloring should be lighter/darker

Just seems very plain

yeah it is petty plain, but if i used special fonts i would have to use their band fonts, and i dont like using too many type faces, it makes it look messy, and i think if i did all one as a grunge font or artistic font it might not fit, you know what i mean. i appretiate the input i might change too...if i find something i like that works

thank you

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