Hello here is the final version of my tune second view.

the tune is final but i will remove the vocals @ begining.

How ever i want you guys to listen and review it, and then i want to know if its signable.

Tnx for spending your time reviewing.//Mavve

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http://s25.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...9L1IDA7OOW1JF07

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realy like it keep up the good work mate should get signed nice beets........

Last edited by covert23 on Jan-27-2006 at 20:42

Tnx for your support =)thats why I love this place.

like the tune..sounds pro too.

tnx man, but any one that can review it?

hey mate,

nice track, although that high synth is not my cup of tea, but nice flow

the other melody is the main part is very cool

good work, keep it up!

cheers,

Peter

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hehe Tnx m8 , that melody was writen when drunk =)

I thought of this as a Intro track to a mix thats why the build up with the high end synth is so long .

Damn...

Your compression seems a bit too harsh for me. A bit too much of that pumping sound (it's very subtle but I get the feeling it might be a tad too much).

I like that squeelch noise. Sounds nice.

Bassline is nice.

Some need delays on that sine-type synth.

Vocals are cool. I like them phased out and put in the background. Well done.

/me listens to Maiwand - Second view [01:55 of 07:27m/224Kbps/44KHz]

Yea... I really like it. But your compression is starting to give me a bit of a headache.

Keep working on your mastering and I'll think you'll have a fap-tastic track.

Good going.

9/10

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Originally posted by DJFreaq Damn... Your compression seems a bit too harsh for me. A bit too much of that pumping sound (it's very subtle but I get the feeling it might be a tad too much). I like that squeelch noise. Sounds nice. Bassline is nice. Some need delays on that sine-type synth. Vocals are cool. I like them phased out and put in the background. Well done. /me listens to Maiwand - Second view [01:55 of 07:27m/224Kbps/44KHz] Yea... I really like it. But your compression is starting to give me a bit of a headache. Keep working on your mastering and I'll think you'll have a fap-tastic track. Good going. 9/10

tnx mate for the review Im glad you liked it and ill add some delay and take care of the compresion .

Great melody, If this is what you come up with when you're drunk, then sign me up as an official alchoholic

I think the vocals compliment the song beautifully, and shouldnt be removed, but Im assuming they must be in order to get signed. This is the sound of success.

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tnx for thos great words but actuly those vocals are owned by me =)
so they are in for the signing !