oldschool sound... not my style but not a descent song overall... just not my style so i don't really want to shun it... maybe others like this kinda stuff
Feb-02-2006 00:08
covert23
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2005
Location: YORKSHIRE
thats what i was aiming for old school
ill keep at it... work work work slave to the rythm....he he...
Last edited by covert23 on Feb-09-2006 at 23:08
Feb-06-2006 22:48
Speactra
Oltha
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Uppsala , Sweden
This sounds just like phasios old stuff.
I think that he used this sample in one track.
I like it because it's taking me back to those times
Some badies though:
The intro is very boring imo, nothing happends in like 1 min.
Also I think you could have shorten the echo in the end...
Your bass is loosing power every keychange...
The bass on the intro is nice and the vocal idea a good one but a suggestion might be to lessen the repetition of the vocals there and add something else in to help the progression of the intro.
From there it builds nicely though before the vocal develops with other lines its repeated a bit too much for my liking. So maybe lessen that a bit, another idea could be to put some fx on the vocal to vary the way it sounds so its not as repetitive for example some distortion or delay effects.
The oldschool sound is very nice indeed, just some work on the vocals to add a bit more variety really. The break is nice too, good stuff.