any comments much apreciated...

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Hi dude,
U gotta fix that kick up imo, is overcompressed or sort but sounds distorted and is crashing with all though.
I would work out more the structure, there is nothing hapenning in ur tune really, and becomes a bit bored.
Not bad but sounds very basic .
Keep it up.
Kopi =o.

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it seems quite fast.

this poor lil track is being dragged down by an overcomped kick. it needs more low i think. either change the kick or lower the ratio/threshold.

its quite loud overall which is good..


build gets a bit repetetive but i like some of the sounds you use.

2;55 - i like the quiet break. the sounds work well. drumroll is very out of place on this track tho.

main part - i think the bass needs to be introduced earlier. it sounds a bit empty before its re introduced.

overall the track sounds quite non amature. but parts let it down. you need bigger percs for this track to work. beefier.

i think a lower bpm and maybe less percs would work better for this cos it sounds like quite a chilled track.

please dont take this review in a bad way. overall the track is good. i thought id point out some of the things that let it down/need lookin at so you can make it more sucessful.

keep at it.

rich

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Hey,

The kick is certainly getting a bit lost within the other sounds, that needs sorting out, but Kopi has already pointed that out.

The break is very nice but not a fan of those whirly sounds coming out of it really, but thats just personal taste. It has a good groove to it afterwards too, nice on on that. Overall though a bit more variation is needed, some surprises along the way would increase its quality no end. The listener always loves some unexpected twists.

Good work, keep at it.